It's pretty okay...
It's pretty okay...
Oh fuck this was funny. I was scoffin' on me ciggies and fuckin' coughed up when they took off...shit was great...
I gotta say...I thought I was looking at ToonBoom...and for flash this is kind of a feat really solid work on everything...and I love your designs...
while the jokes weren't anything super special, the art was nice...I can give 2 pieces of really good advice though; Don't use the first draft of (or in some cases entire) joke use the second or beyond version (or joke). This allows for you to have more of your own flavor than initially. secondly I'd advise a bit more expression in the characters faces. Nothin' fancy just keep the visual readable and interesting..
I am a maniac...and I am an artist...
Age 28
Bandit
Tiffany's School of KILL
NASTY NOWHERE
Joined on 6/19/15